Realisticfiction Story

Title A Story About a Baseball Player

by Dong Kuk

Scene 1:

Choo Shin Soo was a baseball player but he was not good at hitting so his teammates was mean to him only and the people were watching and always said mean things to him.

Scene 2:

At 7 o'clock am, there was a tournament between the Reds and the Reds biggest rival Dodgers. So at six o'clock the reds came to the field where they will play against the Dodgers and practised on the field. When they were practising Reds teammates said to Choo Shin Soo “You better hit home run or you will be out of the game forever!” Choo Shin Soo felt worried that he will be out of the game forever, his heart began to race, he thought that he better make a home run.

Scene 3:

’beep’ the game started. Choo Shin Soo was the first hitter to hit. Before he went out to the game his teammates reminded him, “Remember loser, make a home run.” Choo Shin Soo hold the bat with his hands shaking, he was swallowing hard, he bite his bottom lips.

He went out to the field with his legs shaking and he saw that everyone was complaining about Choo Shin Soo is the first hitter because he was bad at hitting.

Scene 4:

The Dodgers best pitcher throw the ball to him, and he tried to hit but he missed. “Strike one!.” said the umpire. The other teams pitcher throw the ball again and Choo Shin Soo missed again! “Strike two!” the umpire said. The other teams pitcher throwed again, but he missed  again! “Strike three, out!” the umpire said again. When it was strike three suddenly the crowd stood up and shouted, “Booooooooooooooooo, you are nothing but trouble!” It was out so he went back to his teammates and when he came one of his teammate shout to him, “Why didn’t you hit the homerun!” and other teammate said angrily “You didn’t even hit one single ball !” And the others furiously shouted  “You will never go to the game once again!” Choo Shin Soo felt sorry and sad and worried that he’ll lost his job.

Scene 5:

The game was over, the score was Red:1 Dodgers:4. Choo Shin Soo’s teammates was disappointed at Choo Shin Soo.

Scene 6:

Choo Shin Soo was walking through the street and when he was walking he saw that the the car was going straight to the old man who is walking through the road so Choo Shin Soo ran to him and saved him. The old man said to Choo Shin Soo “Oh, thank you so much.” And im and wondered to himself “Ah, when I was young I was in baseball team and I was very good at running and batting but now I’m just a old man.”

Scene 7:

“Wait!!! You were a baseball player!?" Choo Shin Soo asked surprisely. “Yes.” said the old man. “What’s your name!?” asked Choo Shin Soo surprisely “My name is Choi” said the old man. “Really, then you’re my biggest, greatest fan!” said Choo Shin Soo excitedly. But Choo Shin Soo told the old man that he can’t hit very well, so the old man said that he will teach him how to hit.

Scene 8:

An hour later Choo Shin Soo reached the old man’s house. In the old man’s house there was a tons of trophies and there was a baseball field. On the baseball field the old man threw the ball to see how he hits. When the old man saw how he hits he was pretty disappointed at him because his legs was in the wrong position. So the old man correct Choo Shin Soo’s leg position and told him “Now feel the swing of the bat, feel it.” So Choo Shin Soo swing the bat and he can feel the swing so when the old man threw the ball to Choo Shin Soo, he hit a homerun. He was surprised to hit a homerun so Choo Shin Soo thanked the old man.

Scene 9:

There was another match with Dodgers again so Choo Shin Soo pleaded to his teammate that can he play in the field but they didn’t allowed but the coach let him play one more time and said to him “Don’t fail and disappoint others again.” So Choo Shin Soo said “I will not disappoint you again.”

Scene 10:

Choo Shin Soo went out to the field and he saw that everyone was complaining and shouting bad words to him, but when they saw Choo Shin Soo hitting home runs, they dropped their mouths. Even his teammates dropped their mouths and everybody started to change. Everybody started to cheer for Choo Shin Soo so Choo Shin Soo hit a 3 home run in a single match.   

Scene 11:

The game was over and it was, Reds:14, Dodgers:9. Choo Shin Soo’s teammates were very proud of Choo Shin Soo so Choo Shin Soo was very happy. Choo Shin Soo was the top star in his team now and when he was 51 he became a good coach than any other coach in the world.

THE END….